Go Away Go Away Poem by hopeless 111

Go Away Go Away

Rating: 4.8


go away go away
i can not force you to stay
but, what i know you will return
you must go away to know
whom you prefer
i know you are too selfish to take such a hard decision
not because you love me
but for yourself

go away go away
you are not a man to care
i was blind to see, selfish and the way you love yourself
you think you are the only one in the world
the only one walk under the sun
weak up weak up
you are nothing to care
i recover from my illness
to see whom i must care
plz go away but never return
as there no more the woman you met before

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Al-kurdi 20 May 2008

fantastic poem..we should always say to everyone like him 'go away'.

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Doha Ewiess 30 August 2009

fantastic as usual....but this is so hard if it is a real experience! !

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Lola Hi 31 July 2009

wooooooow i really love it fantastic mostly the verse when u say'u think that u are the only one in the world the only one how walks under the sun.

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Yasser Koor 15 October 2008

beautiful poem and full of strong words i can use it to whom don't deserve the love. i like it, , especially: do u think u r the only one the only one walk under the sun good work

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Blue Eyes 13 August 2008

SUCH PEOPLE SHOULD BE REJECTED BY ALL HEARTS OF MEN AND WOMEN...I LOVE THE WAY U NARRATED THIS POEM NICE WORK.

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egg salad 19 June 2008

a bit rough in places but otherwise very good

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