Glint Of The Broken Poem by elysabeth faslund

Glint Of The Broken

Rating: 5.0


In our severing
I toast with a shattered glass.
Always the laughter.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Desantis 05 May 2008

nice! ! Funny, but at the same time sad...almost ironic i would say, and very clever. Plus you win pt's from me, as i often reference shattered glass in my poems...Great stuff in 3 lines! 10/10

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Emancipation Planz 01 May 2008

and if any Merlot spills from the bottling line today... I shall think of you.... Salute! !

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