Glimpse Of Love Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Glimpse Of Love

Rating: 5.0


there is a magic
in the way you walked
along a whispering green road
it resonates in your sweet smiles

you never knows
what true love is
until you looked at
the world around you

on a summer rainbow
when the dew is falling
bright stars are peeping out
the sea keeps its tenderly tryst

you finds your soul then
you finally realizes that love
is not a vanished dream
but a thing that dwells forever

every love was invested
which a kind of fairy grace
innocent touch and hope
emanating from its own fancy

morning flowers that
sang beautifully together
around twilight garden
where you lively danced

the charming butterfly
that flew beside you
the wave whose murmur
was never out of your ears

between love and you
hung only a thin layer
I could never opened
but sometimes fate blew

I caught a glimpse
of enchanting beauty
only nuances of your heart
but have always and always

make my life worthwhile
you are alive in my life
you inspires me to continue
to live, to love, to beautify love

(dedicated to Kim Sun Kyung, a beloved one)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 10 July 2009

wonderful cognitive metaphor: ''make my life worthwhile you are alive in my life you inspires me to continue to live, to love, to beautify love'' an excellent idea...10 +++ from me

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Allan Macli Borges 10 July 2009

everyone should know this truth: 'you finds your soul then you finally realizes that love is not a vanished dream but a thing that dwells forever' true love lives forever....

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Alf Hutchison 10 July 2009

A lovely tribute to a beautiful lady well done Ahmad regards Alf

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aw. this si touching.. it touched me..... nice.

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Louis Rams 10 July 2009

when a person writes about love, it comes from their heart ono a blank piece of paper, and carries the reader to a far away land. this is what you have done. excellent write! teeeeen

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Nooruddeen Mm 09 October 2009

A real good tribute to your loved one. Tks Nooruddeen

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Aijaz Asif 29 July 2009

bravo, bravo....very beautiful and smooth writing brother with nice flow and heart filling words...this is what love is, when one feels filled and complete and without it, you feel like that voyager who is lost in the barren desert and yearning for just a dropp of water....thanks for sharing this wonderful work with me, many, many 10'sssssss rgds asif

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Cheung Shun Sang 27 July 2009

You got a joyful one. Very well-you must happy

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Sadiqullah Khan 23 July 2009

fine imagery, Well written.10

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Seema Chowdhury 13 July 2009

nice tribute to a good friend.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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