Glass Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Glass

Rating: 5.0


We don’t want to see
Behind the mirror
Satanic moments
Terrible error

Close your eyes
Wipe the brass
Turn on the light
Make it glass

(2008/6/18)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 18 June 2008

Wise words again in this clever piece, thanks for sharing,10 Lynda xx

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Marvin Brato 18 June 2008

Seeing through life like glass is quite uplifting, for knowing exactly what you want or like to do with your life with less worries is sort of rewarding! A 10.

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... ... 19 June 2008

Is crystal clear that this is good! Bravo!

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Tsira Goge 18 June 2008

Very emotionally, and at you fine versification, the Nightingale. ...10... Tsira

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Thad Wilk 18 June 2008

Behind the mirror could seal your fate Satan could be lying - in wait! *10*! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Kesav Easwaran 18 June 2008

few lines telling a lot...on vision behind...on vision beyond...10

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Rani Turton 18 June 2008

I like this-looking into 'the beyond'. Very poetic. Thanks.

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