Aditi Khandelwal

Rookie - 1 Points (December 27 1997)

Glad You Came - Poem by Aditi Khandelwal

Oh! Rain I am so glad you came,
When tears roll down, will you hide my pain?
Oh! Rain I am so glad you are here,
Will you help me, when my friends are rare?

Stay with me, when no one is there
Be with me, when I don't know I am where.
Don't even go away, when the sun is here
Let's make a rainbow in the sun's glare

All this time, where had you been?
Times without you are not the same, I've seen.
I need you when I am sad, when I cry
Without you my tears seem so dry.

Without you the land is bare, so is my soul,
Without you the trees are dry, so are my eyes.
Without you my days are black like coal,
Without you every emotion dies.

Oh! Rain I am so glad you came,
When tears roll down, will you hide my pain?
Oh! Rain I am so glad you are here,
Will you help me, when my friends are rare?


Comments about Glad You Came by Aditi Khandelwal

  • Rookie ishant Bhurani (1/20/2014 12:17:00 PM)

    Awesome.. Lovely and at the same time, touching... you seem to be so experienced some times... I mean in these lines-Without you the land is bare, so is my soul, Without you the trees are dry, so are my eyes..., you just gave the poem a new life..! Keep Going..! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,824 Points Wahab Abdul (2/11/2012 12:04:00 PM)

    the poem has a mystical music with gushing flow of water and full of buckets of flowering words. cheers, my dearest poetess. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (2/11/2012 11:29:00 AM)

    What a lovely thought. There was time when I was lonely, but I found that I have to be a friend and then maybe someone will return it. If not, I have to find happiness within myself, because nobody can give us happiness. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 249 Points Vipins Puthooran (2/11/2012 11:01:00 AM)

    'Tis a beautiful poem/good metaphor/excellent rhymes/top marks! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, February 11, 2012



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