Giving Up On Life (Secret Message Poem) Poem by Ronald Chapman

Giving Up On Life (Secret Message Poem)



To run away from life,
Give into stress and strife.
Up in flames of fire,
On the way to end my,
Life. I cry and cry why!

Is this really
The day I want to fly to my end?
Greatest dreams can still be had.
Failure is falling down falling down.
Of all my bad sad times,
All my life's hard work is thrown away with my ending.

Step into open space. I think,
Back to my childhood days.
And look back as I
Remember my days of winning games,
My fun young days of my
Achievements of swimming playing piano, writing song, singing, first job.

No accomplishment is ever to small not to
Matter in this world.
How many times have I given
Big favors to others?
Or. Gave gifts to the ones I love.
Small favors add up to the incredible achievement of showing love.

These achievements,
Are not ever forgotten.
My life is filled with so many
Achievements. I cry stop!


The Secret Revealed:
'To give up on life. It is the greatest failure of all. Step back and remember my achievements. No matter how big or small. These are my achievements.'

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The secret is revealed by reading the word at the beginning of each line of the poem vertically. This then forms a sentence, when read down with an additional message.
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