Giving In Poem by Nicholas Wayde Turner

Giving In

Rating: 4.8


They took our life and tore it apart
Before they knew we had it all
They are living their lives
While you and I are still lost in a sea of tears
On a boat searching for land
I wish I could be the man you deserve
A man who would stand up to his family and stay with the one he loves

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Matt Mooney 21 May 2013

I like this poem.It states with fine imagery and very clearly how your own feelings and emotions are not being recognised.10.

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