Treasure Island

Nicholas Wayde Turner


Giving In


They took our life and tore it apart
Before they knew we had it all
They are living their lives
While you and I are still lost in a sea of tears
On a boat searching for land
I wish I could be the man you deserve
A man who would stand up to his family and stay with the one he loves

Submitted: Thursday, May 02, 2013
Edited: Friday, May 03, 2013
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  • Matt Mooney (5/21/2013 6:12:00 PM)

    I like this poem.It states with fine imagery and very clearly how your own feelings and emotions are not being recognised.10. (Report) Reply

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