! ! ! Given Up Hope! ! ! Poem by Kieran J1996

! ! ! Given Up Hope! ! !

Rating: 2.5


I breathe no more,
Not one gasp of air,
I've given up hope,
I no longer care,

Take my last breath,
Retire in death,
Leave behind all the pain,
And never have to feel, it unwanted presence again,

Given up all hope,
Finally resigned,
To the simple fact,
That you'll never be mine,

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UnKnown Messenger 28 July 2010

I agree, a sad poem, but is very good. But i feel no one can ever belong to anyone, we're forever free. We can have hope for lost love or simply see that we can never lose anything that we never had. depressing moments in our lives come and go as do people sadly.

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Tamika Tucker 28 July 2010

awww, that is a really good poem but it is sad.

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