Give Me A Life In You Poem by Unwritten Soul

Give Me A Life In You

Rating: 4.4


Hold memories
To be in your life
Touch me
As if you feel it still
When the days left us
I wont let it go
Will you let me go?

All the shadow of our past
Haunting my steps ahead
So I surrender all of mine to be yours
Promise my name to be written inside you
Till the end of the days
Let it stay...stay..stay

(chorus I)
Never will i...let it go
Forever mine
But take all
to be yours

(chorus II)
Don't let it fades away
Give it a life in you
In your moving days
To breathe till the end of time

If i have granted a wish to be true
I want to own time to be back with you
And replay all memories again, again and again...
Around and round the past
Breathing in your breath
till there's nothing left
forever It stays
In hearts
of us...
till the end of time

(repeat the chorus I and II)

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This is not my poem but my ballad song, it came like the way melody was coming to me, like a thrown back song of 90's ballad song. The song is about a farewell to the close ones or about missing someone that back in past, I wrote just because i noticed how fast time is moving... and of course it is unstoppable, even for a while to pause it hahahaha...so when someone is leaving current time or we are living for a new stage of life, we may missed people that around us, thinking we feel blessed to know them once and feels like wanted to visit the past because of beautiful memories_Soul
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Neela Nath Das 09 December 2013

Very nice song and you know your footnote is fabulous! Loved the ballad!

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 09 December 2013

The poet unwritten soul has turned into a song writer. when I had read your song morning, Soul, I was smiling and thinking how you could sing this song doing your work...well done..Keep it up; ; ;

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Musafir .. 09 December 2013

so creative... The emotions in the words is your power.... Your work always touch so deep.... Keep writing and keep smiling... _Sea

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 10 December 2013

this is an amazing poem. always, anytime.

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Marco Angelo 13 April 2014

This poem really inspired me to start writing a poem.. thanks for this beautiful work...

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2017

Dear Unwritten madam, this poem or ballad song which has been written in favour of farewell to your close ones or about missing one has significant influences on readers. I appreciate your way of presentation and eloquency of the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2016

The beauty of love! ! Nice work.

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Negar Gorji 26 November 2014

an alive and enjoyable poem. well done honey!

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Neela Nath Das 25 August 2014

Really, it happens to me.I love to stroll down the memory lane.I remember all faces of past, I miss them too much.Soul, this poem is fabulous! Again I'll come to read it.10++++

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Lyn Paul 23 August 2014

Promise my name to be written inside of you.- These are such beautiful words Soul. I have read these words before and now wondering if you have added the final touch. Music. Thank you Soul I hope you are still creating all of your magic

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