Smoky Hoss

Silver Star - 3,941 Points (01 may 1962 / U.S.A.)

Ghost - Poem by Smoky Hoss

Sometimes I see you
standing all alone out there.
I smile and wave, as you vanish
into thin air.

A distant wind comes calling
to whisper a sweet ageless echo in my quiet ear,
in it I feel a warm breeze
... a breath drawing near.

I sense a simple presence
all around,
and feel light footfalls
upon the golden ground.

In the noonday sun
or the blue-moon of midnight,
a tender touch I know I know
pours down holding me long and tight.

The ghost
like endless memories of a certain kind,
comes to abide the empty cooridors
of my lonesome and fragile mind.

Comments about Ghost by Smoky Hoss

  • Gold Star - 5,005 Points Lorraine Colon (11/22/2013 11:07:00 AM)

    Cling to the ghosts. Sometimes that's all that there is. Very nice poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 337 Points Dee Corpolongo (11/12/2013 9:30:00 AM)

    Another wow from me...this hits me right in the heart, understanding the
    loss and pain felt along with the emptiness of losing a loved one. Excellent write. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 633 Points Lawerence Mize (11/12/2013 5:20:00 AM)

    The spirit lives. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,413 Points Valerie Dohren (11/7/2013 4:46:00 PM)

    Really beautiful Smoky, your poem gives life to your ghost. Very well written indeed. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, November 7, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, November 9, 2013

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