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Juniper March
(10/14/2009 5:57:00 PM) |
It hurts to read a poem this good. My head is spinning just incredible I can taste the words
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Mari Velazco
(8/7/2009 7:45:00 PM) |
wow!
it makes u feel lyk
if u were actually there
or lyk if it was on t.v
I LOVE IT=]
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Josephine Dunn
(7/7/2009 12:52:00 PM) |
Wow - such vivid pictures - such smells - fantastic!
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Harashia Cassano
(6/2/2009 8:50:00 AM) |
I Love this poem... It is the truth about some men... Not all though
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Stefanie Padilla
(6/3/2008 4:56:00 PM) |
Yes, quite.
Scintillating scent
toe-groove truth
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okeydokey #3
(2/21/2008 10:15:00 PM) |
Oh wow.
I do not quite know what to say.
It is good, no?
A little...well.
Never mind.
I like it.
Quite.
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Delilah Miller
(1/7/2007 5:46:00 PM) |
'Come together like bed sheets and bury me' Sounds like Pablo is overwhelmed by all the activites described.
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John Tiong Chunghoo
(12/23/2006 9:01:00 AM) |
pablo sounds vulgar but not obscene in this wonderful poem.
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