Gauge Of Time... Poem by SALINI NAIR

Gauge Of Time...

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Time started in a deserted cart
To the vacant shores that eternal
Before the start of life on earth
To the strips of emptiness

Clouds were splendid in those times
Water was pure in deep blue seas
Greenery grabbed its silent whispers
Dictator moved to the frame of earth

He drew the chart of life on earth
Plot of birth to death of life
Growth that stable and fertile
Fade of life to the mourn of life

Created species on humble stalk
Protracted with gracious hands
Inane dolls grin inside
With a vision to dominate that cart

Moved on the precise ways plotted
Make and ruin a leisurely task
Never dormant or slept in ways
But with the vigor to explore more


Seize that all dreamt but futile
Invasion that planned but drowned
Revival a plea in pensiveness
But slipped from the cart to eternity


It moved to the shores of eternity
Not passionate on lanes crossed
Invisible to the glimpses of hope
But generous to the act of life

Justice privileged on its run
Truth hidden but thrust itself
Sinner perishes in long run
Dictator of all in an eternal cart!

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Thursday, November 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 13 November 2014

Nice work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 November 2014

Gauge of Time... by SALINI NAIR a nice presentation from deserted cart to eternal cart..thanks

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 November 2014

Time of finite and infinite duration so well presented in a very well composed poem.....amazing indeed....kudos

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Akhtar Jawad 14 November 2014

Justice privileged on its run Truth hidden but thrust itself Sinner perishes in long run Dictator of all in an eternal cart! A poem of deep thoughts.

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Saheb Mohapatra 13 November 2014

time started in a deserted cart To the vacant shores that eternal Before the start of life on earth To the strips of emptiness..............................great way to present the most powerful thing in this world; time................................nice job.thanks

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Ramesh Rai 13 November 2014

Presentation of time is unique in your write. Enjoyed reading.

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