Garden Of Five Senses Poem by jibin joseph

Garden Of Five Senses

Rating: 5.0


Early morning.
When the birds sing,
I hear you.

When the flowers bloom,
I see you.
When the suns rays embrace,
I feel you.

Fragrance the wind brings,
I smell you.
And the bees whisper,
As you do.

“I love you too”
My garden of five senses
It’s..…………..

You
You
You

You
And
Only you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prasanna Kumari 04 February 2007

i feel the breeze of love caressing me in a garden full of flowers...really beautiful poem...with very few words you can express so wonderfully well....

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Tom Green 04 February 2007

That poem is really beautiful. Your poetry just gets better! Keep writing!

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Preeti - is here! 04 February 2007

Garden of 5 senses...this one smells good, looks great, tastes divine, feels lovely and most of all rings musically in my ears! Superb!

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Esther Leclerc 04 February 2007

Ever so romantic, gentle... the imagery calls to the soul of the nature lover. I love this. Esther : ]

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Raghavan Warrier 04 February 2007

This is superb poem written with intensity of passion and maintained throughout the poem. Wise use of few words to great effect.

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Gone with the wind 31 July 2008

This was a very beautiful piece..cultivating love and care

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Ernestine Northover 24 February 2007

Haven't forgotten you Jibin, just haven't been around much for a while due to packing to move house. This is a starry-eyed poem. Such a pleasure to read, amorous and tender in its words. Very well presented too. I liked it a a lot. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Sara Crandall 05 February 2007

Wonderful, joseph. I like it alot. A touching love poem, expressing only what the five senses should have been made for.......love.

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Qais Shah 05 February 2007

Psychosomatic Syndrome would be thrilling title for this poem...

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Mary Das 05 February 2007

Garden of five senses is very unique. So much is said and it's lovely.

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cochin, kerala state, india
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