Theodora (Theo) Onken

Freshman - 813 Points (Washington State)

~garden Of Beauty~ - Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Where beauty lies sleeping
In the Valley O' Green
She 'tis surrounded by
A sun-drenched sheen
Amongst the Lillies
And Lilac's in repose
All the pleasure in naptimes
Close
Reflections of grandeur
And beauty supreme
Reflects off of
Downy Brook Stream
Fair maidens and flowers
They all do grow
Asleep or awake in the
Vallley below!


Comments about ~garden Of Beauty~ by Theodora (Theo) Onken

  • Rookie Lillian J. (9/1/2007 10:30:00 PM)

    Lovely flow, chimerical!

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,646 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (5/31/2007 7:32:00 AM)

    Theo,

    I love your poetry so much...most especially this lovely garden poem...I should take lessons from you.

    Dorothy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Fischer (4/19/2007 9:11:00 PM)

    Nice vivid description and detail. Your words painted a beautiful and peaceful setting that we all thrive on as poets. Great work. Top marks!
    -Michael (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,887 Points Lawrence S. Pertillar (4/15/2007 11:48:00 PM)

    Won-der-ful, Ms Theo. Great write. Love this.
    L (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 110 Points Cecil (cj) Krieger (4/15/2007 11:19:00 PM)

    Absolutely Beautiful! ! Great write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 15, 2007

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 15, 2011


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