Game Poem by Marieta Maglas

Game

Rating: 5.0


In the game of seasons,
if you had been 'The Fall',
I would have been the spring
to inspire you with the fragrance of my roses.

In the game of this universe,
if you had been the sun,
I would have been the rising moon
to embrace you from time
to time.

In the game of the Earth,
if you had been 'The Mountain',
I would have been the valley
to hear all the blues of your river.


In the game of thoughts,
if you had been an abstract idea,
I would have been your value of judgment
to keep safe the great wisdom's treasure.

In the game of feelings,
if you had been my love,
I would have been your lost hemisphere
to search for you and only for you.
I wouldn't stop this game.

Copyright © Marieta Maglas. All rights reserved.

Saturday, May 16, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: game,idea,love and life,moon,mountain,rose,sun,earth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mira A 10 September 2009

you are truly gifted...: -) wonderful to read ur poems

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Abigail Roscoe 30 September 2009

a game of love, beautifully phrased and expressed.i like your style of writing, which touches the soul!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 September 2009

The game of universe, in which, if you had been the earth, I would have been your moon, by eclipsing you forever, my dear........lovely imagination and honest desire for supplementing each other's love... uniqaue feeling and well versed poem....10 read mine...anyshere...love at first sight......how are u? ? ? ?

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Francisco R. Albano 05 October 2009

sadness well articulated

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Jessica Hoffman 09 October 2009

this poem scores the highest rating for its originality..wonderful tribute to someone...10

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Okan Emanet 04 August 2010

Fantastic, splendid and fabulous... The characterization throughout the poem has deepened me into my past life. I really thank you for writing such a wonderful poem...

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 22 March 2010

Here Object [You] is in upper hand than the Subject [I] … and free flowing…and symbiosing. 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Jayram Daya 28 January 2010

The game of love, every one plays. Winner takes it all. I like it. Written with deep thoughts.Excellent poem.

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Marieta Maglas 18 December 2009

From: Karin Rodrigues (Argentina ;) To: Marieta Maglas Date Time: 12/18/2009 9: 37: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00) Subject: Game This poem leaves an echo in the mind Thank you for sharing 10 Karin

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Merna Ibrahim 29 November 2009

You have mentioned the most important games....well expressed! ! Thanks for the comment :)

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Marieta Maglas

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Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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