(g) 3 (Biographical) The Ocean Paradox Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

(g) 3 (Biographical) The Ocean Paradox

Rating: 3.5


I'm turbulent
My waves surge to reach out
To the roof of my mind
They crash at the shore
of my restless psyche making me blind
They heave with a passion
In a bid to reach out to my dreams
They immerse you suddenly
And take you in my regimes
They dance and sway
With the natures heartbeat
They resound with echoing love
Travelling with a lightening speed

I'm tranquil
My inner recesses are still
In a stark contrast
I'm vivid blue in daylight
And dark as wine in the night
You can drown
If you dont know how to swim
Or discover new islands
If you learn to float in the brim
I have a breathtaking new world
Living inside that u wouldnt have imagined
Where millions can get immersed
Infinite depth unfathomed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Darbyshire 10 August 2006

Real sweet poem Tran-Q, Love dave xxxxxx

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Dee Daffodil 12 August 2006

Very beautiful poem....excellent write...I love the Paradox. Hugs, Dee

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Duncan Wyllie 12 August 2006

I love this from start to finish, what amazing feeling, 'I'm vivid blue in daylight And dark as wine in the night' Now there's poetry at a fine moment Love duncan X

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Preeti - is here! 10 August 2006

I like how you have brought out the inner changes in this poem! ....it's lovely! and a change for sure ~ Preets

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 10 August 2006

DUELING WATERS...I LIKE IT, T.O....THIS IS A SOLID, AUTHOR CUSTOMIZED BEAUTY, MY DEAR! YOU GO WITH IT T. O.! ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Nalini Hebbar 10 August 2006

TO...real deep ocean...i like the islands...and i like it that the colours are changing too...love...nalini

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