Full Trust Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Full Trust



I look at sky
And dream to fly
Wish to build simple way
To walk on it with easy pathway

I still pile brick by brick
Color it and stick
With firm views
For others to see

I put full trust
In their quest
To ask for new
In morning as dew

I am not disturbed
As views are often curbed
Under one pretext or another
But that stops me to bother

Let people form independent opinion
And project as different one
I am fully associated with their views
As some of the suggestions are worth to see

Monday, October 20, 2014
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

A good notion William van Nieuwenhuyze1 hour ago You express your view of connectedness meshed with individuality well. I enjoyed the simplicity of your third stanza, than expand it with more detail over the next two.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2014

I look at sky And dream to fly

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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