.... Full Collection Of Seven Deadly Sins Part 1 Poem by Eyan Desir

.... Full Collection Of Seven Deadly Sins Part 1

Rating: 2.7


.....Lust.......

Straight from the gutters of hell!
She blows, sweeter than sugar
She burns, flaming desires
Consuming all our emotions
Imitating the wings of love
Exciting and breath taking
Over flowing souls with her passion
Raging with infatuation
Hungry with an obsession
Not submitting to devotion
So powerful and strong
Luscious tasty desires
Never last a lifetime
But cause some a lifetime of pain

........Adultery
In the circle that binds love
Wrapped with loyal bonds
Clever demons play their songs
In mortals weakness moments
The tunes of love and lust
Creeps within their core
Silencing all their morals
Rendering these mortals
To their emotions
Clever demons laugh
Whiles their legs splits apart
And a sinner rushes in
To eat the forbidden fruit

.....Jealousy

Resentment mixed with greed
Are the tunes she sings
From love and lust she bleed
On envy she feed
In human's core she live
Upset with what she loves
Envious of hearts possession
Dirtier than dirt
More twisted than a devil
It was her that corrupted him
And changed him into a rotten apple
Her song is a terrible thing
It opens a gate to other sins
This sour vindictive witch
Will push soul further from God
And straight into the fires of hell!

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Soul 05 October 2009

I appreciate this imagery of the poem, it's very unique.

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Quin Faas 05 October 2009

a good write. Moral Value-

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 October 2009

Good meaningful poem Well penned. enjoyed reading it

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Allan O 05 October 2009

I enjoyed both parts, but must agree with another who made comment. broken down into single segments would have given better aspect. but i did enjoy...thanks

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Lady Grace 28 September 2009

your composition is a peculiar dear..and this is a sign of creativeness..this is not a brief summary but the copy of all deadly sins..mygosh..i think, this is my first time to see a posted poem consisting of many poems inside..this is a good idea...and every step u make..hope, there's always an angel guiding your way...BISMILLAH

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 15 October 2009

Your poem is filled with moral standards that many head not. for centuries man's attitude have shifted back and forth to suit a man's wants and needs.Your poem gives one something to think about. Good write, Eyan.

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Marvin Brato 09 October 2009

Very profound thoughts...must become moral standard to reflect upon.

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one of the best poems i read...10sssssssssssss

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Subbaraman N V 07 October 2009

A very deep message! Nice write at this young age!

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Kristina B; Williams 07 October 2009

EXPLOSIVE, AND, DYNAMIC..WHAT GREAT WRITE, YOU CAPTURED THOSE SINS, AND TURNED THEM INTO ANOTHER MORE SINFUL SIN, AND THAT IS A GREAT MASTERPIECE OF WORK

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