Full Circle Poem by Brian Hinckley

Full Circle

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I turn my back
for just a moment.
I can see you
and the tears in your eyes.

I turn again
just for a second.
I can see you
and the smile lighting your eyes.

I turn once more
and stay.
I can see you crying
as I keep you in my arms

forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Agnes Török 06 May 2007

It's all about the last scentance or word and you got this one just right. Wonderful.

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Michael Fischer 25 April 2007

Nice poem. I liked the title and the ending. Never let go to those who are most important to you. Top marks! -Michael

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Brian Hinckley

Brian Hinckley

Buffalo, New York
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