Full Adoption Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Full Adoption

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Full adoption

What is so special?
For an individual
To live as good person
With vivid reasons

I asked many colleagues
And argued
They had only one answer
'Never ask such things in future'

Why should I not search?
Why life does not reach?
At peak level with compassion
Why is it with so much of strained relation?

Something is really missing
Either we are not going
With ideals set or ignoring
Complete aim of life as boring

The result is startling
People are killing
And innocents have no voice
They die as no other choice is open

Full Adoption
Wednesday, August 24, 2016
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2016

The result is startling People are killing And innocents have no voice They die as no other choice is open

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2016

Saba Rahil yeah..... Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2016

x We have been missing you for a long time. It is a great pleasure to read your beautiful verses once again. KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Aug 24,2016 25 Aug

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2016

Happy Janmastami to you, Hasmukh ji. Glad, you are back with your simple and ever valid thoughts. Please do continue to post. Thank you. Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad Aug 25,2016 25 Aug

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2016

I was thinking to post a response. But fell short of words. Well written. Rahat Farooqi, Srinagar, Kashmir Aug 25,2016 25 Aug

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2016

Dear prabhu sir and Surya, It is so heartening to note your heart felt response. I was not getting access to muse India. I am back home with same zeal and dedication. It is real home coming and I feel it within. So nice of you and all poets.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2016

x I agree with Surya. It is indeed a pleasure to see you back in YS. Best regards, Supratik Sen, Kolkata Aug 25,2016 25 Aug

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 August 2016

It is nice to see your poem in this space after a long time. Welcome back, Hasmukh Bhai. In your natural style, you have raised a vital issue in this poem. Yes, indeed the high ideals and values of an earlier period have been forgotten and degraded now. GSP Rao, Hyderabad 25 Aug

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