Fruitless Expectations Poem by Seema Aarella
Fruitless Expectations
Like a fish escaping my grasp
Leaving a faint tickle of its scales
To linger on my gentle palm
A dream slipped through the
Moist edges of my eyes,
Leaving me to sulk through
In soreness of an infertile sleep.
Like the last gravel of sand
That left a hint of its earthly scent
As it slithered through my clasp
An untimely desire perished
As my heart hastened its birth
Leaving me to silently brood
In colossal pain of early abortion.
Failure is not an option but it did happened.Great piece.
Beautifully imagery... worth reading..... deserves 10/10.
symilies chosen and their style of presentaion make the poem sounding. shan
Wow Seema... This is what I liked the most... It made me think for a while and grasp the full of it... Thasnk God, I didn't let it escape like the fish in your poem... :) Desires and expectations and what an imagery you have created here... Simply amazing... Thanks for making me read this one... Regards, Kamran
Ufffff.......superbbbb write seema ji, a marvellous write with very deep thoughts no matter how many time i read it, it still seems as i'm reading it for the very first time, as im reading my own thoughts and feeliongs in this master piece, thanks you for sharing it and it definitely goes to my most favs, many many 10ssss for it rgds asif
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I would like to translate this poem
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well narrated simile...nice...10