Adeline Foster

Freshman - 961 Points (Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD)

.frost Flowers - Poem by Adeline Foster

.Frost Flowers

Bits and pieces, drops of life
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Comments about .frost Flowers by Adeline Foster

  • Gold Star - 11,843 Points Daniel Brick (3/5/2014 10:40:00 AM)

    I love the language of this poem, it perfectly captures the delicate pattern of frost flowers. Now I'm assuming frost flowers is a metaphor for the patterns created on windows by frost when the temperature outside is really cold. And ironically these frost flowers are transient and fragile like real flowers in spring or summer. The cold can grip a city for days, but the frost flowers disappear in a breath. I like the way the images in the second and third stanzas echo each other: wondrous heartshapes/wondrous heartaches. And that refrain: in the snow!
    I live in Minnesota and right now there is a mound of snow piled against my patio fence like a frozen wave poised to crash down on my door. And so your evocation of one of the delicate features of winter is especially welcome. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Sheri Brown (2/24/2014 5:17:00 PM)

    Ahhhh memories, this is a very well written piece, beautiful imagery, very descriptive, I appreciate reading this gem. Thanks so much for stopping by and reading my piece Deliver Us from Evil I love your style :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,903 Points Patricia Grantham (7/13/2013 8:35:00 AM)

    A beautiful imagery of flowers encrusted in the snow. There
    is beauty that is also found in the winter. So very good in
    wording and details. Please read my poem Snowflakes and
    Diamonds in the Sky. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 36 Points Oyekake Satty (o. S.) Joshua (6/29/2013 7:11:00 AM)

    Who are you Adeline? This is simply beautiful and flows so rhythmically. It's so evocative that I find myself transported in a snow covered flower garden admiring these frozen petals! You are truly gifted, Adeline! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 648 Points Ruth Walters (6/11/2013 4:44:00 PM)

    beautiful in description (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Slm (2/22/2013 9:01:00 PM)

    oh look, i have already been awed by this poem. well, i still like it a lot (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Slm (11/18/2012 5:13:00 PM)

    Thats so awesome! Your describing words are funomanal! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sangnam Nam (11/10/2012 10:32:00 PM)

    snow, crystal, frost, flowers and petals, nice combinations of cool imagery (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 548 Points Ency Bearis (11/5/2012 8:31:00 AM)

    A wonderful poem, great vivid write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 7 Points Frank Mceleny (9/3/2012 11:58:00 PM)

    I like the imagry of snow. I came from a dirty little industrial town on the banks of the River Clyde. It had blackened sandstoned tenements and a thousand smoking chimney pots that looked down on hard cobbled narrow streets. Hard town, hard people, but then the snow. The town is set in the hill of a deep valley and I lived on one of the highest streets, and when the snow came it came heavy and it lingered there and it covered everything and suddenly it was clean, virginal. A late night snow meant no footprints, only unblemished white garments and silence. Could this be a taste of heaven, this muffled silence, this purity, this removing or covering of dirt? These were my thoughts as a troubled young boy from a broken home where silence only ever came in the dead of the night. Yet, like that silence in the night, I knew the snow would not last and so it was only there for a moment to be savored. There Adeline, see what your poem has made me write :) ..........Frank (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Edwin Baldwin (8/31/2012 10:10:00 PM)

    A feminine take on the bits and pieces that are the indwelled memories of our lives… very lovely and, telling indeed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 126 Points Kelvin Owusu (8/30/2012 4:32:00 PM)

    this is a really good poem very well structured (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 22 Points Michael Kozubek (8/28/2012 10:59:00 PM)

    Good imagery: ice, crystal, translucent, snow. I learned a new word encrested. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie cynthia gomez (8/24/2012 11:57:00 PM)

    u told me to take a look at this and i did...and it isver good (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chris Blazo (8/16/2012 2:06:00 PM)

    I relate to this poem so well. An A+. Beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Johnathan Juarez (5/5/2012 7:28:00 PM)

    i can't get over how precise this poem feels (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 70 Points Johnathan Juarez (5/5/2012 7:25:00 PM)

    wow that was so beautiful thanks crystal moments (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Besa Dede (3/4/2012 8:11:00 PM)

    Bits and pieces, drops of life
    Falling petals, crystal moments
    Stage-set in translucent glass
    in the snow.
    Time goes by so fast, for everyone! Adeline, you really captured life in those verses! Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reginald Francois (2/7/2012 4:33:00 PM)

    Great beautiful I can not say more the words fit the title nicely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 480 Points Patti Masterman (1/19/2012 9:20:00 AM)

    Wow, the lines truly support the title and the structure. Sunburst rain a killer image. (Report) Reply










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