From The Day One Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

From The Day One

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From the day one I had given indication
I shall stand by in every occasion with dedication
There was no compromise and ruled out of question
No intention to hurt each other and words mention

I am fully aware of what the marriage stands for
It is not battle ground or areas for fighting war
Meeting of minds and souls to search ground
New relation to grow and intimacy to be found

Marriage is sacred bound to go for holy test
Eternal peace along with joy to emerge as best
Must couple with smooth sailing in calm sea
It is not “I” always but life mission as “We”

It is not easy to let out soul to a stranger
You may be hit severely with words or anger
Physical assault and harassment may form the routine
Each day must be lived happily as valentine

It is how we forget mistakes and day pass by
Hand to hand movement and not feeling shy
Heaven and happiness can be experienced with sincere try
Posing the question to self and asking question why?

It is unpardonable crime if we can’t last long
Can’t move happily as the ideal couple among
After all what it stands for all the time to come?
Live to be spend happily and always welcome

I, as an individual, may have some ideals
Sometimes may not prove as practical or real
After all it is not a contract but holy deal
God has blessed you always before putting seal

Let us not break it for want of nothing
It has message and offers something
Cementing the relation is not an easy task
Life may move on horizons very fast

There may appear dark clouds to wreck
You got to be alert and always check
What can be next move to protect the link?
Ship has to be salvaged before it sinks

I wish in life that millions to follow
Prove to self by not making it hollow
Restrict the provocation and don’t allow
It is always fruitful if you lie low

Life is holy mission and must grow
Love and happiness must naturally flow
It is not one side movement or vehicular traffic
Its impact on life is strong and terrific
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chand Shikari 14 July 2010

From the day one I had given indication I shall stand by in every occasion with dedication There was no compromise and ruled out of question... NICE RESOLVE....10

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Fred Babbin 19 January 2010

The poem sounds very cognitive, very intellectual. That may because you must use English or the influence of your culture. BTW, the marriage you refer to: did it come from a romantic relationship or a family arrangement?

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7he N0153 4nd 7he Fur9 14 January 2010

Hi hasmukh, i think the phrase 'From day one' should be edited into this poem and title instead of 'from THE day one', it's a common mistake, when using english as your second or third language, Apart from that, i think this is a great poem! ! !

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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