From One To Ten Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

From One To Ten

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One represents loneliness
Two represents togetherness
Three brings shed and happiness
Four completes family phase

Five is there for struggle to survive
Six may make attempt to revive
Seven is to turn hell into heaven
Eight to make stubborn bid not to be driven

Nine is there always to feel fine
Ten may represent” What else then”?
It is not simple figure game
Much more has to be gained out of them

We are merely looking
For scapegoat and booking
We will go on cheating
The conscience and equating

It is there for all to see
Count on it and feel free
It is significant to think and forget
The figures may always look good and represent

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2014

One represents loneliness Two represents togetherness

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2014

Kera Hart3 minutes ago It was very truthful.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2014

good Khushi Singh3 minutes ago very imaginative 2 write such a poem Comment +1 How we continouskly blame others for our own actions.

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Suman Kumar Das 08 January 2014

Dear Sir! 10 on 10! .................technically shoothing with beautifull words.............loved it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 January 2014

Wtevr I love it. It makes me think.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

surekha.[ mem.. bhu sunder

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

« Delete » noel elnol nice one

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

*Gyulce* ?(*) ? vrey good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

a welcome mericela remirez a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 January 2014

Sir, it's a nice read for me. A well thought element used in a poem. Poetry has lots of freedom and possibility and this is an example. Thank you for making poem (life) more than numbers. Respected! Eagam Khaling, Darjeeling Jan 11,2014

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