From Kindle To Ashes Poem by Tia Attwood

A separation can be hard on the mind and body that can take a lot to get over. A great poem.

'Our journey travelled now divides' loved this line and the way you start the poem with this line, repeated it again at the end of the first stanza, then enclosed the poem by repeating the first stanza again as the last stanzas; I loved all the last lines in your stanzas, especially the strength of the third stanza. I wonder how you feel about the word 'which' becoming 'life' in the second line? 'A love of life been pushed aside' which seems to fit your feelings and overall sentiment? :)

My shattered dreams of me and you Of what once was and always knew, In memory of love once true My shattered dreams of me and you.. love and the terrible experience of being shattered.. but there is hope in poem. thank you.tony

I'm loving this poem. It shows us how we should appreciate things. good work!

Ah, the Phoenix arises from ashes. Thanks for sharing, Tia

Love is a spiritual experience that affects us profoundly, its effects linger long after the source of stimulation is gone. It's whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. A lovely piece of poetry nicely penned with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.