From A Son Who Could Not Be His Father Poem by Cheryl L. DaytecYañgot

From A Son Who Could Not Be His Father

Rating: 5.0


When I was young, you’d hold my hand
We’d swim the seas, explore the land
When ghouls and trolls would visit me
I’d call your name and they would flee
You’d carry me on your shoulders
I’d feel so tall above the earth
Proudly, I’d say when I grow up
I’d be like you, and you would clap

Silver would gather in your eyes
We’d embrace; how time really flies
Then you told me to go to school
To be like you- nobody’s fool
But my interests are different
I want to paint every event
Life’s exposed truths and hidden lies
I witness with my own two eyes

You love to talk, to entertain
With words you heal a world in pain
You are so good at what you do
But then I can’t really be you
I have no wish to disobey
I love you every time of day
I tried to be hard as I could
A rhetorician in your mold

I fear the crowd, its probing eyes
I don’t get Socrates and Marx
Van Gogh and Picasso I know
They’re men as great as your Rousseau
I think I’m just not meant to be
The copycat of somebody.
Let me pursue my hopes and dreams
Let me hum with the flowing streams

Let me go where the clouds travel
Life’s mysteries, I’ll unravel
Dance in the rain, fly with the wind
Talk to the hills, hear the bird sing
For while I may not be like you
I love humanity just as you do
Politics works to set them free
Just as art does, so let me be.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nia Riz 04 November 2008

i read this poem again....and then actually understood that this poem has lots of other beautiful meanings too....beacause of the rhyming scheme...it makes me want to read again and again....this poem sure proves that you know what poetry is and how to write is....i hope to see more of poems like this in future...good luck.. - Nia Riz

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Barbara Terry 04 November 2008

This is so very true Cheryl. We can copy others, but then we would be living somebody else's life and not our own. Every person has a soul that makes us unique as individuals. If we follow our family traditions, then we are a robot, primed and raised to fill a vacancy once one opens up. But, if we go our seperate ways, and do what our soul dictates we do, then we are an individual. It is a good thing that not everybody in this world is the same, because then it would be a boring place to live. This poem is very well written and thought out. I give you a 10 for this. Hugs, Barbara

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Nia Riz 04 November 2008

good rhyming scheme...and a vry good poem...keep writing, ..

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Cheryl L. DaytecYañgot

Cheryl L. DaytecYañgot

Baguio City, Philippines
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