Friendship Poem by fathima zainab

Friendship

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FRIEND IS A FLAMING CANDLE,
IF WE BLOW
IT'S OVER,
IF A BIRTHDAY,
OR DEAD DAY
THEY USE CANDLE.
LIKE THAT A FRIEND,
IF A SORROW OR HAPPPY,
WE SHARE WITH OUR FRIENDS.
WHEN WE TALK A SINGLE WORD LIKE HEATING,
IT'S BLOWING THE CANDLE WHEN NO CURRENT.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Kavdia 04 March 2012

keep trying, good work.

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