Friends, Love, Life Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Friends, Love, Life

Rating: 4.2


In all honesty, you are beautiful
Despite the backlash
Between the mind and that beating drum
Slipped, tripped, fell in
That four letter word
Caved in,
A world of a word which I don't understand
A dramatic change of feelings
Agonizing pain of lovely memories
A friendship changed,
Through the cause of one word
Between two others

To say she's beautiful
Is an understatement
She's beyond a bond
My life's blood
Resonates through her veins
The combination of hers and mine
One, breath of her breath
A life created by tango
Two, a strong kick, healthy
A joy, shown through a teary smile
Not heaven sent but heaven itself

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stevie Taite 29 October 2012

Kevin, this may be my favourite so far! Especially the last stanza! The discovery of your new felt bond, and joy described beautifully. Perfect!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 31 October 2012

Friends all over the world....yeah, it's also strange for me(I mean the lines: A dramatic change of feelings Agonizing pain of lovely memories A friendship changed, Through the cause of one word Between two others Still it's a mystery for me that how a word can ruin a relation between two friends those were close to each other for years? a great work well done

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 30 October 2012

beautiful poem in which the heaven felt!

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Anita Sehgal 30 October 2012

a lovely piece... a joy!

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Stevens Cadet 07 January 2013

Love the painted picture in this one. Continue shining light on this world

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 10 November 2012

Nice way of putting that one loves is like being confronted with heaven itself. Nice way of putting this idea across. Great lines.

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Aung Si 01 November 2012

very nice poem! beautifully written! keep it up! my vote is 7.Enjoyed it

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Aung Si 01 November 2012

very nice poem! beautifully written! keep it up! :)

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Nader Baheri 31 October 2012

real or the true lovers are the ones who their souls have joined together in a body.and can not be fallen apart by words. nicely piece of written.10+++++

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