Beach Girl


Friends - Poem by Beach Girl

My far flung friends
Like stars above
You sparkle through the night

Unreachable
Yet beautiful
You fill my heart with light


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is referring to all the wonderful friends I've made via the internet. You know who you are.

Comments about Friends by Beach Girl

  • Gold Star - 7,160 Points Herbert Guitang (5/24/2015 7:35:00 PM)

    Lusciously sweet for your beautiful poem (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 23,878 Points Kelly Kurt (3/30/2015 9:08:00 PM)

    Thank you for sharing this poem I enjoyed it
    Peace. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,434 Points Bri Edwards (6/9/2014 11:52:00 PM)

    don't you have telephones? ? thanks for sharing. well thought out. and nice rhyme. gee, it just occurred to me; do you mean PH friends? we may not share phone numbers, but many are available here!
    i've got to go to bed soon, but hopefully you can find a sparkle or two in my poems whenever you care to look. you brighten up our lives as well. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,698 Points Anthony Di''anno (3/20/2014 8:28:00 AM)

    Drop dead gorgeous. I tend to neglect short form poetry in my writing. Your poem has demonstrated how powerfully beautiful it is to read and marvel at the wisdom it contains.
    Truly inspiring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie April Hester (3/17/2014 8:46:00 AM)

    Well said. This one is short but sweet. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 646 Points Frank Ovid (3/2/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    Friggin' pretty good. Ovid (my ancestor) would be proud. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,798 Points Sekharan Pookkat (2/14/2014 12:28:00 PM)

    unreachable.but reachable- how/ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Goldheart Bird (2/10/2014 10:15:00 PM)

    Very pretty, I get annoyed sometimes when there are long poems. Like Cassandra said, ''it holds a lot of meaning''.
    : D (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,418 Points Khairul Ahsan (1/24/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    Your poem, and the note, is very warm, just as the poet!
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 54 Points Cassandra Jasmine (1/16/2014 5:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Despite it being short (I, really, don't have a high preference for long poems!) , it holds a lot of meaning. :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,515 Points Savita Tyagi (1/14/2014 8:56:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. In today's world far flung friends are closer. Beautiful analogy. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 171 Points Marcus Mckinley (1/10/2014 2:23:00 PM)

    a very calming succinct poem. i like it (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (1/9/2014 3:46:00 PM)

    an apt expression of far flung friends like stars above for the internet friends...so delicate beach girl! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 9, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, January 22, 2014


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