Beach Girl


Friends


My far flung friends
Like stars above
You sparkle through the night

Unreachable
Yet beautiful
You fill my heart with light

Submitted: Thursday, January 09, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, January 22, 2014

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This poem is referring to all the wonderful friends I've made via the internet. You know who you are.

Comments about this poem (Friends by Beach Girl )

  • Bronze Star - 5,586 Points Bri Edwards (6/9/2014 11:52:00 PM)

    don't you have telephones? ? thanks for sharing. well thought out. and nice rhyme. gee, it just occurred to me; do you mean PH friends? we may not share phone numbers, but many are available here!
    i've got to go to bed soon, but hopefully you can find a sparkle or two in my poems whenever you care to look. you brighten up our lives as well. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,096 Points Anthony Di''anno (3/20/2014 8:28:00 AM)

    Drop dead gorgeous. I tend to neglect short form poetry in my writing. Your poem has demonstrated how powerfully beautiful it is to read and marvel at the wisdom it contains.
    Truly inspiring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie April Hester (3/17/2014 8:46:00 AM)

    Well said. This one is short but sweet. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 623 Points Frank Ovid (3/2/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    Friggin' pretty good. Ovid (my ancestor) would be proud. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,125 Points Sekharan Pookkat (2/14/2014 12:28:00 PM)

    unreachable.but reachable- how/ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Goldheart Bird (2/10/2014 10:15:00 PM)

    Very pretty, I get annoyed sometimes when there are long poems. Like Cassandra said, ''it holds a lot of meaning''.
    : D (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,258 Points Khairul Ahsan (1/24/2014 10:48:00 AM)

    Your poem, and the note, is very warm, just as the poet!
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 53 Points Cassandra Jasmine (1/16/2014 5:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Despite it being short (I, really, don't have a high preference for long poems!) , it holds a lot of meaning. :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,859 Points Savita Tyagi (1/14/2014 8:56:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. In today's world far flung friends are closer. Beautiful analogy. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Marcus Mckinley (1/10/2014 2:23:00 PM)

    a very calming succinct poem. i like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (1/9/2014 3:46:00 PM)

    an apt expression of far flung friends like stars above for the internet friends...so delicate beach girl! (Report) Reply

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