Beach Girl


Friends


My far flung friends
Like stars above
You sparkle through the night

Unreachable
Yet beautiful
You fill my heart with light

Submitted: Thursday, January 09, 2014
Edited: Wednesday, January 22, 2014

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This poem is referring to all the wonderful friends I've made via the internet. You know who you are.

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  • Veteran Poet - 4,807 Points Bri Edwards (6/9/2014 11:52:00 PM)

    don't you have telephones? ? thanks for sharing. well thought out. and nice rhyme. gee, it just occurred to me; do you mean PH friends? we may not share phone numbers, but many are available here!
    i've got to go to bed soon, but hopefully you can find a sparkle or two in my poems whenever you care to look. you brighten up our lives as well. bri :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,669 Points Anthony Di''anno (3/20/2014 8:28:00 AM)

    Drop dead gorgeous. I tend to neglect short form poetry in my writing. Your poem has demonstrated how powerfully beautiful it is to read and marvel at the wisdom it contains.
    Truly inspiring. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Goldheart Bird (2/10/2014 10:15:00 PM)

    Very pretty, I get annoyed sometimes when there are long poems. Like Cassandra said, ''it holds a lot of meaning''.
    : D (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 27 Points Cassandra Jasmine (1/16/2014 5:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful! Despite it being short (I, really, don't have a high preference for long poems!) , it holds a lot of meaning. :) (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 4,410 Points Savita Tyagi (1/14/2014 8:56:00 AM)

    Lovely poem. In today's world far flung friends are closer. Beautiful analogy. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 573 Points Shahzia Batool (1/9/2014 3:46:00 PM)

    an apt expression of far flung friends like stars above for the internet friends...so delicate beach girl! (Report) Reply

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