Friends Poem by sharmaine moyani

Friends



It looks like an angels,
It feels like magnet,
It taste like chocolate,
It smells like blooming flower,
And it sounds like romantic.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Aparejo 19 October 2011

Hi, Your poem follows the pattern of our topic of sensory imagery. However since your title is 'Friends' it is better to use 'They' instead of 'it' since 'it ' signifies singular inani.mate object. Thanks for sharing, its a good try.

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