Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 243 Points (India)

Friends! - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

Do they hear footsteps fast?
How I wonder they better forecast
Spring or Winter, how they come to know
before they come and before they go?

How I wonder they could foresee fate?
In coming and going I never see them late!
Friends! I do fear, both of them are true!
They come and go or just come to go.

© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved. 

Topic(s) of this poem: friend

Comments about Friends! by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (4/16/2009 12:01:00 PM)

    Palas, It's Remarkably, friends can hear without words..10........
    All best,
    Tsira (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie James Nall (2/21/2009 5:02:00 PM)

    Good write, Palas! I added you to my friends list, gave you a 10 on this one.I like simplicity in writing and think you would find mine interesting. I write to Make People FEEL and THINK about not only the words, but, the message that they reveal. Try Kann abels restuarant, The hustler or whatever you like. Captain Paranoid has a hidden message that is right out front and most miss it. it was one of the more difficult and complex poems I wrote., See if you can tell me why? Thanx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (2/8/2009 3:57:00 AM)

    I love the music of this poignant, wistful piece. True friends, I believe are parted
    only by death. And then they live on in the landscapes of the mind. Your friendship
    has enriched my life. Thank you for your warm birthday wishes.

    Always your friend at poemhunter,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Moushumi moushumi (2/7/2009 7:49:00 AM)

    All your poems make life more interesting.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 16 Points Kelvin Karani (2/3/2009 10:56:00 AM)

    Friends come and go. Just like lovers do. But can we do without them?
    Interesting piece there. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kite Remedy (1/30/2009 4:35:00 PM)

    friends come and go,
    just like the wind's blow..
    nice piece here.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mamta Agarwal (1/30/2009 9:18:00 AM)

    vey interesting perspective, dealt deftly. truth is friends come and go, like life's ebb and flow. it makes us sad, sometimes the vaccuum is never filled. however, true friends are soul mates, they do hear, see and feel even when you are silent.

    Palas this a very intense poem, you have said and left unsaid so much....10

    Mamta (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,067 Points Indira Renganathan (1/29/2009 1:55:00 AM)

    A friend in need..a stitch in time indeed...and friendship has relative names like parental friendship, maternal or paternal or spousalfriendship too..great 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Anjali Sinha (1/28/2009 1:54:00 PM)

    wow friends viewed
    in a different
    +++10 anju (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Maia Padua (1/27/2009 9:15:00 PM)

    friends come and go but their memories engraves in our hearts...
    they are friends so hard to forget....
    thanks for sharing this....a very original style of wordings
    to come up with another good concept on friendship...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Avinash Thakur (1/27/2009 12:24:00 PM)

    a different observation.....very good (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 27, 2009

Poem Edited: Friday, June 6, 2014

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