Freshwater Lake Poem by Lily YANG

Freshwater Lake

Rating: 4.0


I came from the lake,
Going to the fresh water,
Into the freshwater lake.

Monday, January 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lake,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Stafford 12 January 2016

Charming and fresh! well done.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 January 2016

For the sake of your sweet love. Nice work.

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Gajanan Mishra 04 January 2016

wonderful- fresh water to fresh water lake..

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 January 2016

Going to fresh water is very interesting and amazing definitely. Wisely penned poem shared.10

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