Freeze This Moment Poem by Vizard Dhawan

Freeze This Moment

Rating: 5.0


We were sitting on your rooftop
Staring at the skies
The sun was dipping lower
I looked into your eyes
You saw what I was feeling
I know you felt it too
We wanted time to just stand still
Then forever there'd be me and you
Why can't we freeze this moment?
Return to it in time
Stay together through the years
Proclaim I'm yours and you are mine
So let us freeze this moment
Store it safely away
Even if we leave this place
We'll return to it someday

To the world you may be one person,
but to one person you may be the world.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 01 January 2013

Wow! This is just perfect with great rhythm and flow capturing the moments so beautifully and what a gem the last two lines are! ! Brilliant write! !

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Ketan Hukare 01 January 2013

Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! I liked it very much! My vote is 10

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Valsa George 31 December 2012

Wonderful Vizard! You are indeed a wizard, playing magic with verse! But is it not too early 'to freeze the moment'?

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