Maya Hanson (mye3)


Freeing Feeling (part 1)


The freeing feeling of finishing
The final foot of your fields
The fantastic fever of friendship
The fitting fate of the fire

The majestic melody of movement
The mutual mess of meetings
The magic of momentous moments
The marvelous mark of memory

The reflection of ravenous running
The relaxed repetition of rhymes
The rampant realism of remembrance
The random rush of reality

Submitted: Thursday, December 19, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, January 06, 2015

Topic of this poem: rhyme

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I wrote two more alliteration poems like this (Darkest Dimension and Cosmic Certainty) with different letters. Check them out if you want :)

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  • Rookie - 358 Points Maya Hanson (12/21/2013 2:54:00 PM)

    S.zaynub Kamoonpuri- thank you! No, this is the first alliteration I've done because I'm not going in order, just doing the letters that come to me. But my goal is to do the rest of the alphabet as well. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,549 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/21/2013 1:25:00 PM)

    Wow dis is brill creative alliteration. U hav done A B c d e in another poem? Enjoyd d M stanza most. Nice to read u again. (Report) Reply

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