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Maya Hanson (mye3)


Freeing Feeling (part 1)


The freeing feeling of finishing
The final foot of your fields
The fantastic fever of friendship
The fitting fate of the fire

The majestic melody of movement
The mutual mess of meetings
The magic of momentous moments
The marvelous mark of memory

The reflection of ravenous running
The relaxed repetition of rhymes
The rampant realism of remembrance
The random rush of reality

Submitted: Thursday, December 19, 2013
Edited: Friday, December 20, 2013

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Did ya like it? ! ? :) I will be doing more alliteration poems like this, usually in sets of 3, and my goal is to finish every letter of the alphabet! Except maybe X and Z :)

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  • Rookie - 320 Points Maya Hanson (12/21/2013 2:54:00 PM)

    S.zaynub Kamoonpuri- thank you! No, this is the first alliteration I've done because I'm not going in order, just doing the letters that come to me. But my goal is to do the rest of the alphabet as well. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,095 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (12/21/2013 1:25:00 PM)

    Wow dis is brill creative alliteration. U hav done A B c d e in another poem? Enjoyd d M stanza most. Nice to read u again. (Report) Reply

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