Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,822 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Freedom And Slavery - Poem by Aftab Alam

A pair of sparrow
On my window
For tomorrow was
Making the nest

All wit they applied
Grasses and twigs
They supplied
Made the best

And here my Aghaz
Happy enough
Dreaming to have eggs

Although both,
The Bird and my son
Dreaming and dreaming

Though both were dreaming
Yet dreams differ,
Eggs were under the threat
Without agony and fret
One to hatch and bring them
Into the beautiful world
To fly into the heaven freely
The other to make them slave
And to kill by unwanted love
Love can’t be poked every where.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Freedom And Slavery by Aftab Alam

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/4/2013 10:14:00 AM)

    Great comparison..Freedom and Slavery.....Loved reading it. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,905 Points David Wood (9/3/2013 5:50:00 AM)

    Fod for thought Aftab, a good comparison. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,612 Points Elena Sandu (9/2/2013 3:02:00 AM)

    Great comparision, yes how different dreams about one same thing could be! A wonderful food for thought, thank you! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 3, 2014

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