mai venn


Freedom - Poem by mai venn

So soon comes the night
Covering the earth from the light
Conscious shadows forming everywhere,
Casting doubt, imposing fear.
Into our subconscious
Come uncontrollable dreams,
Now in torment,
Unmerciful screams,
Confined within this prison of the night,
The dark is at war with the light.
Freedom is a dream dressed all in white
Comes with the dawn, flees with the night.
Angle like face, fading gradually in the mist,
Awakens the earth with the ease of a kiss.


Comments about Freedom by mai venn

  • Gold Star - 6,917 Points Hazel Durham (7/28/2013 4:16:00 PM)

    Stunning write with great intensity and amazing lines! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,269 Points Ramesh Rai (7/22/2013 5:39:00 AM)

    the breezes, the brooks, the birds, the sky, etc. must be realising the real value of freedom. nice piece. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, July 6, 2013


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