Freedom Poem by Mai Murphy Venn

Freedom

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Freedom - Poem by Mai Venn

So soon comes the night
Covering the earth from the light
Conscious shadows forming everywhere,
Casting doubt, imposing fear.
Into our subconscious
Come uncontrollable dreams,
Now in torment,
Unmerciful screams,
Confined within this prison of the night,
The dark is at war with the light.
Freedom is a dream dressed all in white
It comes with the dawn, flees with the night
An angel-likeface,
fading gradually in the mist,
Awakens the earth with the ease of a kiss.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hazel Durham 28 July 2013

Stunning write with great intensity and amazing lines!

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Ramesh Rai 22 July 2013

the breezes, the brooks, the birds, the sky, etc. must be realising the real value of freedom. nice piece.

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