Persian Nightingale


Freedom - Poem by Persian Nightingale

The first step towards freedom
Love

Smile
Make it eternal

The last step
Love

(2008/11/7)


Comments about Freedom by Persian Nightingale

  • Gold Star - 39,820 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (11/20/2008 11:12:00 PM)

    And the message here, as i see it(aside from ''Big things come in small packages'')
    is: All that is good, in life...begins and ends with Love....Yes? Excellent Penning!

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  • Rookie Chitra - (11/19/2008 12:18:00 AM)

    a universal them
    a perfect equation to live by (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Linda Moore (11/17/2008 7:41:00 PM)

    Very Nice.....Love is the answer to most of our problems it is the key to life.....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (11/12/2008 9:44:00 AM)

    The first and last step on the ladder of love, nice write,
    10
    Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 678 Points Ramesh T A (11/12/2008 1:20:00 AM)

    Yeah, love only keeps one free and smile keeps love alive! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kathy Langlois (11/10/2008 2:00:00 PM)

    I could not have put into words any better, please continue too write such beautiful work. Kathy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Julian Salvacion (11/9/2008 10:21:00 AM)

    nice write! ! ! ! ............... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (11/8/2008 8:55:00 PM)

    The freedom to love...what a wonderful privilege! Ten for you.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brianna Wilshusen (11/8/2008 10:53:00 AM)

    Short and simple, yet still it makes since. I like it,10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sarwar Chowdhury (11/8/2008 7:26:00 AM)

    True said..
    After all A to Z love is the fact
    great piece....10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (11/8/2008 7:10:00 AM)

    Freedom>smile>love. I really liked this equation..........10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie C T Heart (11/8/2008 5:11:00 AM)

    compact words of wisdom...a 10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 8 Points Anjali Sinha (11/8/2008 12:32:00 AM)

    heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy so cute
    first and last step is loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee
    regards anju
    ++++++++10
    i loved it (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 554 Points Seema Chowdhury (11/7/2008 11:08:00 PM)

    nice thinking. thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (11/7/2008 10:40:00 PM)

    Wonderfully expressed, in so few words Shiraz!
    Best Wishes my friend! *10*
    Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (11/7/2008 1:49:00 PM)

    You have perfectly told, a nightingale... Love a synonym of the god... And differently it is impossible... 10...
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Annie Girl (11/7/2008 1:46:00 PM)

    short and simple and which it is saying alot i like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M M (11/7/2008 12:59:00 PM)

    Love, beginning and end of all things, like a circle.
    Beautiful words!
    10! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 7, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, December 5, 2008


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