Freedom Poem by Grayson Givens

Freedom

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A state of mind
To find
My lines to freedom
The Sweetest
The Greatest
Is not freedom
the lies that fly
of freedom
are just like poker
its a gamble
Ima a Joker
Its a Joke
I wanna taste freedom
But they just strip it
Rip it from my heart
SO its a state of mind
Just to find
My Freedom
But it doesnt exist

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
April Piesinger 11 December 2009

i like it.... its like a visual of me lol..... i love your poems mwah

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Amanda Sabala 01 December 2009

Nice. It's very eccentric, and very its complex.

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Grayson Givens

Grayson Givens

Oakland, Ca
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