Freedom Poem by Nikunj Sharma

Freedom

Rating: 5.0


Let's sing the freedom song
Along the road of dogma littered dust
Footsteps cracking traditional crust
Steel emerging from the rust

Let's blow the freedom whistle
With the air that's free of smoke
A spirit that grows with every stroke of the clock

Let's lead a life that breaks free
Like a leaf leaving throes of tree
Cliches, practices and old thoughts
Beyond what we seek and what we sought

Let's breathe freedom on this day
New sunshine and a sunny day
New foundations, new castles
Dreams meant for only a few
Wish Happy independence day to you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 15 August 2009

reading this is like a brisk march past...befitting rhythm!

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Danny H 15 August 2009

Happy Independence Day :) Nice poem.

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dr veenaa rai 15 August 2009

a very happy independence day to you too and to all of us!

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 23 August 2009

i agree with indra...a brisk poem full of hope

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Sandra Fowler 17 August 2009

A very positive write. Your second stanza is especially stirring and gallant. I hope there will be many happy returns of your Independence Day. Best regards, Sandra

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Deborah Cromer 17 August 2009

Yes! Good, positive writing. Freedom is such a powerful word. Freedom is such a beautiful way. DC

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Raj Nandy 17 August 2009

Those who had been in chains, have been tortured and imprisoned fighting for freedom and independence, knew what was meant by the word 'freedom'! Our generations know only the dictionary meaning! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Rehana Nazli 15 August 2009

Let's lead a life that breaks free Like a leaf leaving throes of tree .... first of all happy independence day and cheers to your freedom! Please don't despair...kepp burning the diya of hope; peace for all. Rehana 15th August,2009 London, UK

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