Freedom Poem by Rayan Ali

Freedom

Rating: 4.0


Put your head
In the clouds
Up high in the sky
Let your soul
Touch the wind
That blows by.

Take a look at the moon
And all the shimmering stars
That shine so bright
And so far
See the beauty of nature
And find something good
In the future.

Feel the freshness of
The flowers, their coolness
And their power
Walk on the correct way
That God is going to
Lead you on and walk
On your own path
To find your own destiny.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aziz Alkaabi 08 August 2009

First of all, I am impressed. Having realized your creative abilities at this your tender age, I will venture and give my opinion; Raise up your head towards the clouds High and far. Let your head touch the wind blowing so high..................

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