Freedom Poem by Maravan Shelley

Freedom

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Cage the birds are -
Ah, Cage birds or love birds?
Yeah, Love birds are cage birds and yet cage birds are not;
Those loving birds would be ruined if freed-
Freedom that ruins life?
Yeah! ! Also the damn Freedom …..
Freedom that may ruin life.

Love, love and eternal love is their life.
cage and dependancy is their loving life;
We, the mortal, has a cage- Sweet home,
We live for our loved ones unto the lease of our life.
Some freeing themselves from all these bliss
striving for nothing.....
All, social setup and dependancy, these may better us..
Freedom that may ruin life.
May freedom ruin life?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Milo Lone Elk 28 January 2010

Although I am new to what love may be, I find it compelling yet a mystery. As this may be, you have relished a classical disposition of what love can be for the yearning hearts; Love is at its best when depicted from our cages hearts, into the light of our beautiful souls. Among the masterpieces that have explored the mysterious of love, this poem is quick to point out that love can hurt, limiting our ways like a caged bird. I love this poem and I hope you continue your work for others to learn from your perspective.

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