Free Verse Poetry Poem by Savita Tyagi

Free Verse Poetry

Rating: 5.0


When language is used for expression
Words will improvise
Here comes an expert who is so smart
Devises a complex pattern
And hits us with a baton!
The poet cries....
His heart doesn't abide
The tears guide....
And poetry is revolutionized.

Monday, January 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
These few lines were inspired by Kelly's comment and my problem of fitting my thought of the poem ' seven lives ' in traditional limerick form.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 25 January 2016

this is realy what poesy doesssssssssssssssssssssssssssss!

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Savita Tyagi 26 January 2016

Thank you so much for your comment.

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Mithilesh Yadav 10 February 2016

His heart doesn't abide The tears guide.... And poetry is revolutionized. Grrt penned mam ji

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Souren Mondal 09 February 2016

There is an inherent problem with 'purist' claiming that poetry cannot be written without following a particular metre.. When the subject matter is often scattered and not 'coherent' we cannot, as poets, try to bound that in through metres/shackles.. If not, then we should try to do so. Thank you for sharing your poem, it is a just 'Ars Poetica' in its own right.

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Savita Tyagi 09 February 2016

Thank you so much for your kind comment. It means so much.

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M Asim Nehal 29 January 2016

Very well written poem, I liked it. Mr Kelly is inspiration to many on this site and I really enjoy reading his poems and comments.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 27 January 2016

Quiet true. Thank you for sharing this great poem.

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Savita Tyagi 28 January 2016

Thank you for taking time to read and comment. Value it very much.

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Kelly Kurt 26 January 2016

Your thoughts have been put so beautifully into words. It is a difficult thing indeed to take the inner feelings of self and put them into the symbols of words. The beauty of poetry is that it allows you to revolutionize, guided by tears and joy.

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Savita Tyagi 26 January 2016

Thank you so much Kelly. Appreciate it very much.

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