Free Me My Tears Poem by Unwritten Soul

Free Me My Tears

Rating: 4.5


This late evening
I remember those lost eyes
My heart soaked with this emotion again
Oh free me my tears
Free me away
From any fears

Life i am having now
Is because of many hands
That lose the blood for everyone
In a war of heartless lusts
We sacrifice peace for gold
Kill the innocents
Will it feeds our mind
Happy without guilty?

Free me my tears
Let go your grudge away
Free world from the fears
Free harm to near my dears

Shall we be here for a while
Just to ponder what life is for
Is it gold give you all?
Or hearts to fill with loves?
Can you hear the children cry
Is it a melody for your heart?
You longing to hear more
When you take someone from them?
Where's our hearts now
Do we have it still?

We may free now
But why it still happen to others
Do they never learned from past lesson?
Oh free me my tears
Free us away
Free all my fears
.....Free me away
.....Free them.away

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Free Me My Tears, is like asking self to remove sadness but we cant..
..this actually a lyric for a song for Independence days world wide..

August, Is the month where many countries got their
freedom, celebrating independence day...We lost many people
in the past, greedy is always killing. And we may feel freedom
in our own countries but still now many countries and
people struggling for their freedom, and to live life normally
.Don't we have hearts to do this to others? The innocents killed
Oh this all ask my tears to fall down...to whom lost in sacrifice for us..Thanks to them, for our life now...because without you we never get it today
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marimuthu Raken 08 September 2013

Hai Freedom is a choice not a chance Just free yourself Raken/Malaysia

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Neela Nath Das 06 September 2013

Your theme of poem is always universal.I praise each N every word of this superb piece.Salute Soul!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 06 September 2013

a good work I would say tears wont leave us Untill we dont take each other hands for love sharing and change the world Very nice

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Negar Gorji 05 September 2013

dear soul you have a big heart.... i enjoyed it! : D

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Ramesh Rai 06 September 2013

freedom is good but freedom for corruption is worst. before granting independence for british india churchil made such remarks which are now proving true.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2018

For freedom many people have sacrificed their lives. Many people were killed though they were innocents. We tear for them. Still now many countries and people are struggling for their freedom, and to live life normally. A great poem with touching expression.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2016

Free my tears with love! ! Nice piece of work.

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Sossi Khachadourian 31 January 2016

A peaceful world for all of us...thanks for beautiful and meaningful lines blessings!

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Rekha Mandagere 31 May 2015

Sadness and it's relief lies in tears. We always cry for our selfish reasons and now let us shed a great tear for the loss incurred that cannot be estimated in figures for achieving this great freedom.

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Kee Thampi 15 October 2013

soaked with a love to hi=

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