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Free Me My Tears


This late evening
I remember those lost eyes
My heart soaked with this emotion again
Oh free me my tears
Free me away
From any fears

Life i am having now
Is because of many hands
That lose the blood for everyone
In a war of heartless lusts
We sacrifice peace for gold
Kill the innocents
Will it feeds our mind
Happy without guilty?

Free me my tears
Let go your grudge away
Free world from the fears
Free harm to near my dears

Shall we be here for a while
Just to ponder what life is for
Is it gold give you all?
Or hearts to fill with loves?
Can you hear the children cry
Is it a melody for your heart?
You longing to hear more
When you take someone from them?
Where's our hearts now
Do we have it still?

We may free now
But why it still happen to others
Do they never learned from past lesson?
Oh free me my tears
Free us away
Free all my fears
.....Free me away
.....Free them.away

Submitted: Sunday, September 01, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, September 03, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

Free Me My Tears, is like asking self to remove sadness but we cant..
..this actually a lyric for a song for Independence days world wide..

August, Is the month where many countries got their
freedom, celebrating independence day...We lost many people
in the past, greedy is always killing. And we may feel freedom
in our own countries but still now many countries and
people struggling for their freedom, and to live life normally
.Don't we have hearts to do this to others? The innocents killed
Oh this all ask my tears to fall down...to whom lost in sacrifice for us..Thanks to them, for our life now...because without you we never get it today

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  • Dee Corpolongo (9/18/2013 12:06:00 PM)

    Your words are oh so true, as the love and the pain too,
    are felt as one reads on, where compassion seems to be gone.
    Beautiful poem Soul, as you think of others so caring and lovingly. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan (9/13/2013 10:03:00 AM)

    feelings about freedom unleashed freely, yes free us of all fears and tears is a fond wish. (Report) Reply

  • Deepak Sawhney (9/13/2013 7:08:00 AM)

    Unfortunately sadness is the other side (like that of a coin) of happiness. Materialism & covetousness can cause more & more misery. Sometimes it takes sadness to know happiness
    Noise to appreciate silence
    And absence to value presence.
    Well articulated...Soul. (Report) Reply

  • Soulful Heart (9/7/2013 1:36:00 AM)

    free verse and a free thought that binds the common human right.....................good poem (Report) Reply

  • Ellias Anderson (9/6/2013 12:04:00 PM)

    a good work
    I would say tears wont leave us
    Untill we dont take each other hands for love sharing and change the world
    Very nice (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (9/6/2013 9:48:00 AM)

    Your theme of poem is always universal.I praise each N every word of this superb piece.Salute Soul! (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (9/6/2013 9:10:00 AM)

    freedom is good but freedom for corruption is worst. before granting independence for british india churchil made such remarks which are now proving true. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine (9/5/2013 8:28:00 PM)

    True, we should be more appreciative of our hard-won democracies. Maybe in the future we'll become a united worldwide democracy and inequalities will be a thing of the past. Good intentions are a good start. Fine poem. (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilkins (9/4/2013 4:26:00 PM)

    shall we be here for awhile just to ponder what life is for a good question searching for the answer good thoughts 10 (Report) Reply

  • Gulsher John (9/4/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    A burst of heart's feelings........
    Tear and fears is the sole companion of shattered hearts...
    If it let free than the world will see an actual inferno...
    So my dear soul keep them inside and hold on for awhile.... (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (9/4/2013 12:24:00 PM)

    undoubtedly this is one of the best of yours.
    free me my tears is for all homeless vulnerable children freed in the world because of the wars of greedy hearts.only love can improve our world.
    free me my tears really belongs to freedom and those free hearts fought for it.
    ph must have had these kind of poems more.
    nb (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (9/4/2013 9:09:00 AM)

    Free me my tears...an arresting line knitting the poem as a sequence or motif...poet's notes are quite supportive for this thought-provoking sad and serious write:

    Shall we be here for a while
    Just to ponder what life is for
    Is it gold give you all?
    Or hearts to fill with loves?
    Can you hear the children cry
    Is it a melody for your heart? (Report) Reply

  • Adheez Van Der Beanthz (9/3/2013 7:49:00 AM)

    beautiful independent day poem..
    independence is a matter that should be in blessing, filled with both and criticized so are no longer trapped in the colonial cleverly that transforms itself into different forms
    a good write (Report) Reply

  • David Wood (9/3/2013 5:16:00 AM)

    When countries gain independence are the people really free? I do wonder some times with all the corruppt politicians in the world. A good write SOul. (Report) Reply

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