Fred Claus Got It Right Poem by Chuy Amante

Fred Claus Got It Right

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I cried when I saw children being called 'bad'

but cried even louder,
for joy, when all
children were called 'NICE'

Fred Claus was the one who figured it out
I saw it right there on a tv screen
he changed, dropped all judgment
and declared all kids 'nice'

now we are those kids all grown up
what will we declare each other?
Leave all judgment to the judge who
is retired and doesn't judge anybody

Be one with your brother, give him as you
would like to receive

receive by giving,
god fills those
vacuums like he fills those stockings

Wednesday, December 17, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 18 December 2014

I cried when I saw children being called 'bad' I cried when I saw children being called 'bad' but cried even louder, for joy, when all children were called 'NICE' - - -Very nicely envisioned. Word choice is very good. Many thanks Respected Sir!

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Michael Mcparland 18 December 2014

Beautiful poem of love and acceptance. A true and well deserving 10.

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Neela Nath Das 17 December 2014

Be one with your brother, give him as you would like to receive receive by giving, god fills those vacuums like he fills those stockings - - - Profound lines.

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