Fraud? Poem by Sandra Feldman

Fraud?

Rating: 2.8


How do you get 'fifty vitamins',
On a cereal's thin flake?
I can't help but think,
That as most everything,
It's a Fake!

Saturday, April 18, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: trust
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
for all that respect, Truth
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Sounds like a sound bite from an episode of Dr Oz! ...Only one thing different between your poetry and his advice...yours has far more value, and credibility....And, another thing, Ms. Sandra...when I was a kid Kellogg's only claimed 29 active vitamins...Still a fraud...No wonder their headquarters was hidden in the sticks of Battle Creek...So no one could track them down and sue, sue, sue! LoL! All jocund aside tho', young lady...Your words speak creatively expressed truth, that is unless these crispies are chocked full of nano atom size sprinkles of each alleged body builder, which if one ate them twice a day for 150 years, one might pick-up on a nano atom size energy lift! Enjoyed this, as always...~FjR~

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Sandra Feldman 18 April 2015

Your true and humorous words are far better than my flaky lines Your words always do me honor. Thank you so much! you a

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