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Frantic Love

The walls are eating me alive on the inside
I have no sense of insight
Since the man I love despises me
The sign of broken bells
Shall lead to a miserable death
An angel's kiss
Along with many weeping tears
Will never be
There's no rest for the lonely Valentine
Oh dear heart
Beating slowly as if time is running out
My very last breath must reach him
A breath so terribly silent
More silent than a gentle wind

Bells toll
But they won't toll for me
Birds sing
But they won't sing for me
All I have is a loneliness unfair
In an unfair world
But I will always love him
Even when I'm gone

Submitted: Friday, January 31, 2014
Edited: Friday, March 21, 2014

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  • Brian Johnston (2/7/2014 11:28:00 PM)

    Let your unfair loss fuel your drive toward the relief of another's pain, and I promise you will find Beauteous Victory alive and well, prospering even, in every day of your life. OK, OK it's another theory. I'm just full of them. Liked the poem though.

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  • Beach Girl (2/7/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    I got so caught up in this poem, it almost hurt me to read of your heartbreak. You have a powerful way of expressing your pain, extremely moving and intense. Excellent!

  • Efe Benjamin (2/2/2014 5:28:00 AM)

    Nice piece, , , , lovly

  • Sandra Feldman (2/1/2014 5:41:00 PM)

    So sad but none the less beautiful. Your pain has been transmitted through poetic impact, feelings that are not as poignant or as well transmitted in prose.
    That is why the gods have always favored poets and mythology is the most poetical and imaginative of all religions. Beauteous Victory has been blessed by the gods like few are.. Her poetry is a reflection of this blessing.

  • * Sunprincess * (2/1/2014 2:43:00 PM)'s a beautiful write...those last two lines gave me a smile...
    ~But I will always love him
    Even when I'm gone~

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