Fragments of my mind
Are accompanying you
I have never had this kind
Horrifying me
Fragments of my words
Are accompanying you
I have never had this kind
Chilling me
Fragments of my love
Are accompanying you
Why are you so quiet now
No sign, no sound,
No passion, no love-bound
Fragments of my poems
Are accompanying you
At last, you wrote poetry
Or was it just flattering me?
Fragments of my love
Are accompanying you
Why are you so quiet now
No sign, no sound,
No passion, no love-bound
Fragments of my poems
Are accompanying you
At last, you wrote poetry
Or were you just flattering me?
Remember! You loved me!
a surreal picture; i don't mean the poem. the poem leaves questions unanswered! well, some will like the uncertainty is leaves in their minds; they can make up their own answers. at first i thought some 'accident' caused stanzas to be repeated, until i read the ending line. quite effective. bri :)
Thank you for your well meant responses, Bri and of course for your attentive reading. Most important matter in evaluating a poem. Thank you for your precious response. G.B.U. Amen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fragments of my love Are accompanying you Why are you so quiet now No sign, no sound, No passion, no love-bound Your soliloquy is simply so fine........ liked it very much.... your thoughts fashioned inside the fragments....... than k u. tony
This soliloquy was created in 2011....WOW! What a time.....and you have read this in..... nearly the end of 2018.again a WOW! Thank you that you still like my simple words then. Simple words are not always simply fine, but these............ they are.........., G.B.U. Amen