Fragments Poem by Neela Nath Das

Fragments

Rating: 4.8


He told me to divide
the lines in fragments.
I did.
In utter silence
I got a message- - -
Fold yourself.
I folded.
In my absence- - - -
If he wins the heart,
let it be so!
Amen!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 29 September 2013

a meaningful and pleasant fragment is...this piece of poetry too... you captured what you thought in a ruminating poetic moment...so effortlessly written! ! !

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 September 2013

Divided the line and folded in silence I think its a prostration a bow thank you

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Abhishek Mishra 28 September 2013

Lovely...wonderful poem: -)

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Khairul Ahsan 28 September 2013

So wonderful! An amazingly soft poem.

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