Neela Nath Das


Fragments - Poem by Neela Nath Das

He told me to divide
the lines in fragments.
I did.
In utter silence
I got a message- - -
Fold yourself.
I folded.
In my absence- - - -
If he wins the heart,
let it be so!
Amen!


Comments about Fragments by Neela Nath Das

  • Veteran Poet - 1,279 Points Shahzia Batool (9/29/2013 8:44:00 AM)

    a meaningful and pleasant fragment is...this piece of poetry too...
    you captured what you thought in a ruminating poetic moment...so effortlessly written! ! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/29/2013 6:28:00 AM)

    Divided the line and folded in silence I think its a prostration a bow thank you (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/28/2013 9:59:00 PM)

    Lovely...wonderful poem: -) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,748 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/28/2013 9:56:00 PM)

    So wonderful! An amazingly soft poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 30, 2013


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