Fragile Trance.. Poem by Maya Neelima

Fragile Trance..

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My thoughts were like a sludge
Unhealthy,
Faint with a bulge.
I was in deep trance..
Dancing hair,
Twinkling eyes,
Serious stomach,
Careless mind!

You,
Spilled a drop of love,
And i drowned my dreams in that,
Had no hope,
But
Hopelessness was my hope!
I smiled,
And
I was in that deep trance..
Endless warmth,
Feather in breeze,
Happy mind,
Colored moon!

Again You,
Showed a path to betray,
And i counted lies, reasons.
Had no pain,
But
Painlessness was my pain!
I cried,
And
I lost my love trance..
Pale walls,
Unnoticed scenes,
Numb hunger,
Zero temperature.

But..
Never again you,
Can make me to expect,
Make me to wait,
Hopeless, painless,
With happiness,
In my loneliness,
I wish to forget my trance..
My fragile love trance!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Utsav Patel 20 February 2014

Wow.. You have skillfully painted your afflictions! In life when I thought I have no regrets and pain, underneath there may a vast blue yonder. Kudos! Read some of my poems.. Our writing is bit similar. Hope you'll like my work too.

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Biju Benjamin 21 September 2013

YOU, Spilled a drop of love, And i drowned my dreams in that......... In my loneliness, I wish to forget my trance.. My fragile love trance! nice...! ! ! !

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Dave Walker 18 July 2013

A great poem, sometimes we have to be strong.

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