Fragile Toys Poem by Amitava Sur

Fragile Toys

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So many dreams and so many wishes
Are getting regularly marred and blotted,
We are some mare preys only
Before the whims of time and God's wishes.

We the mortal beings
are nothing but some some fragile toys
Being governed and ruled only
As they wish to regulate all the way.
No way to escape even
These traps what are laid.

There lies the misery
Of this mortal life we lead,
Till the final bell rings around
We all have to obey.
Each and everyone of us
Has to pass through these phases.

Nothing we can do besides
Shedding tears and sustaining pain.
We the mortal human beings
Are only some fragile toys
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Amitava


©ALL RIGHTS RESERVED BY AMITAVA SUR

Tuesday, July 8, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fate,misery
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
* Sunprincess * 08 July 2014

.........a beautiful and imaginative poem....yes when I look at the whole picture....I also feel we are fragile toys....a very nice write...

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Roseann Shawiak 09 July 2014

Amitava, yes we are like fragile toys here on earth, being governed, and ruled having to obey or else. There is no escape, we all have to live through life the best we can, shedding tears and sustaining pain as you say in your poem. Very good analogy, Amitava. Great poem. RoseAnn

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Valsa George 09 July 2014

We are just toys in the hands of Fate as ' flies to wanton boys'! Often we are fragile and brittle..... We can be crushed any time... Knowing it, we have to face life as valiant as we can..! Powerful poem!

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Lyn Paul 09 July 2014

Great write, great title. really thought provoking. Thank you

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Akhtar Jawad 24 April 2015

A wonderful poem..................................

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Yes we are puppets in the hands of God.......so nicely put in beautiful words.........................

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Charles Monroe 20 July 2014

Interesting.9.5 War toys with kung-fu grips And elongated metal clips Fancy toys that break with time Are not made for girls and boys Who destroys us fragile toys.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 July 2014

Nothing we can do besides Shedding tears and sustaining pain. We the mortal human beings are only some fragile toys Yes we are nothing but dolls, We are designed for play and amusement, For love and entertainment, Not for hate not for wars, So let us sing and dance, And amuse Him with our romance. We have a short moment, The remote control may turn us static any time, Let us finish the show with beauty of rhyme.

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Geetha Jayakumar 10 July 2014

Beautiful write. Very true said, we are just toys in hands of time, which can be broken anytime. We are mere spectators..loved reading it.

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